I thought your blog post of Teena Marie and Cindy Lauper was great. You do a great job connecting with your audience and creating a visual for everything you are writing about. The one thing I thought you could have done differently was writing more about the chosen songs. You gave a lot of information on the artists themselves, but not very much on the songs you chose to write about. Including the music videos and pictures was also a great addition. Visuals always help me as a reader understand better the topic being discussed.
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